bat out of hell... in story form!

airhead · 28 Feb 2004, 00:59

Heres bat out of hell in story form for you all.

Richard owned a harley davison moterbike. It was silver and black, and he loved to ride it on Friday nights. He lived in a horrible neighborhood filled with crime and homeless people. He had no hope, but he had met his first real love.
Danni was a good young girl. She knew Richard couldn't stay with her. He was a drifter, he couldn't stay in one place. One dark cloudy night, Richard kissed her, Got on his bike. Just as he was about to leave, he stopped.

"Oh yeah, i forgot." He handed her a ring. She immediatly put it on her ring finger, and looked up, breathing heavily at the grubby smiling face of her fiance. Who cares if he was a bad one? He loved her, she loved him. But He left, leaving her behind.

"I'll be back tomorrow!" He screamed.

The wind stung his fingers, his face was ripping. But he went on going, faster, and faster. He was so happy. He had a bueatiful girl, she was the only one who had trueley loved him. He was bad, his lust for life had been almost fatal a lot of times.

He closed his eyes in bliss, imagining her with him. He opened his eyes, and screamed in shock. He tried to turn the bike so sharp, it skidded, right into the brick wall. The cars skidded near him, the horrible sound grinded near his ears...

He closed his eyes and opened them again, and saw, what it seemed to be, his soul, containg his heart, flying away. He whispered. "Danni" a tear ran down his cheek, and he fell asleep.

the people in the cars looked over to see the bike twisted and on fire, and caught in it amongst his blood, a young man.

Heli · 28 Feb 2004, 01:10

Wow!!!!!! That is sooo cool airhead!!!! *wipes tear from her eye* I'm so proud!!!

Keep Rocking · 28 Feb 2004, 10:50

WOW! Great! and heart touching!

Thank you

shadow1000001 · 28 Feb 2004, 14:26

Great job Airhead

Maria

Skeleton · 28 Feb 2004, 16:31

Nice work, airhead.

Testify · 28 Feb 2004, 17:13

thats wicked! nice one

RSG · 29 Feb 2004, 04:24

We all imagine different songs in MANY ways. Glad to hear your view from it!! A bit iffy, on my behalf, but cool cool, I'm glad you shared it. :)

airhead · 29 Feb 2004, 16:07

Quote:

Originally Posted by RSG

We all imagine different songs in MANY ways. Glad to hear your view from it!! A bit iffy, on my behalf, but cool cool, I'm glad you shared it. :)

Thanx! In what way iffy? :)

28 Feb 2004, 00:59	#1
airhead the enchanted spleen Join Date: 12.02.2004 Location: ok, you see that sweet little cottage? I live next door in the nuthouse. Posts: 1,909	bat out of hell... in story form! Heres bat out of hell in story form for you all. Richard owned a harley davison moterbike. It was silver and black, and he loved to ride it on Friday nights. He lived in a horrible neighborhood filled with crime and homeless people. He had no hope, but he had met his first real love. Danni was a good young girl. She knew Richard couldn't stay with her. He was a drifter, he couldn't stay in one place. One dark cloudy night, Richard kissed her, Got on his bike. Just as he was about to leave, he stopped. "Oh yeah, i forgot." He handed her a ring. She immediatly put it on her ring finger, and looked up, breathing heavily at the grubby smiling face of her fiance. Who cares if he was a bad one? He loved her, she loved him. But He left, leaving her behind. "I'll be back tomorrow!" He screamed. The wind stung his fingers, his face was ripping. But he went on going, faster, and faster. He was so happy. He had a bueatiful girl, she was the only one who had trueley loved him. He was bad, his lust for life had been almost fatal a lot of times. He closed his eyes in bliss, imagining her with him. He opened his eyes, and screamed in shock. He tried to turn the bike so sharp, it skidded, right into the brick wall. The cars skidded near him, the horrible sound grinded near his ears... He closed his eyes and opened them again, and saw, what it seemed to be, his soul, containg his heart, flying away. He whispered. "Danni" a tear ran down his cheek, and he fell asleep. the people in the cars looked over to see the bike twisted and on fire, and caught in it amongst his blood, a young man.

28 Feb 2004, 01:10	#2
Heli Daddy's little internet junkie Join Date: 29.01.2004 Location: Grimsby Posts: 4,596	Wow!!!!!! That is sooo cool airhead!!!! wipes tear from her eye I'm so proud!!!

28 Feb 2004, 10:50	#3
Keep Rocking Super Loafer Join Date: 06.11.2003 Location: Sitting on the steps outside, looking so restless and reckless and lost! Posts: 820	WOW! Great! and heart touching! Thank you

28 Feb 2004, 14:26	#4
shadow1000001 Mega Loafer Join Date: 10.07.2003 Location: Red Deer, Alberta, Canada Posts: 2,580	Great job Airhead Maria

28 Feb 2004, 16:31	#5
Skeleton Mega Loafer Join Date: 13.10.2003 Location: Grinning, Ducking & Running Posts: 3,668	Nice work, airhead.

28 Feb 2004, 17:13	#6
Testify ragamuffin Join Date: 21.05.2003 Location: xxx daydreaming xxx Posts: 5,023	thats wicked! nice one

29 Feb 2004, 04:24	#7
RSG Mega Loafer Join Date: 27.07.2003 Location: Canada Posts: 3,296	We all imagine different songs in MANY ways. Glad to hear your view from it!! A bit iffy, on my behalf, but cool cool, I'm glad you shared it. :)