Hi everyone!

Gracie · 14 Jan 2012, 11:11

:)

Your opinions mean a lot!
I have been writing lyrics for a while.

I hope you don't mind me asking you? I wrote this straight after listening to the new album which I like it's, one of the best albums I have heard in years!
I'd be so grateful to know what you think about the lyrics.

From Grace x

'Rebel Gun'.

Your restless soul, I like to watch you wonder
Time is rebel gun, this story’s not ended it’s only begun
A new dawn brings a new day
Don’t fade away don’t fade away

You’ve got so much soul, so much grace
So beauty in this place
You just got to believe

Gotta get there before its too late
In the end its all all down to fate
All the fears in your head
They’re just made up, get out of your bed
All those tears you make me fill up

(Chorus)

Time is a Rebel Gun
As bullets rip the sky open
What is that you want me to say?
I don’t want you to fade away
I can taste paradise when I’m with
Oh Yeah
No need for all this
Oh yeah
No need for all this

No more lies
They are enemies

Wounds that will never heal
I wanna feel peace again
Not too much to ask

Ask God for forgiveness
It shall overcome
It shall overcome

(Chorus)

Time is a Rebel Gun
As bullets rip the sky open
What is that you want me to say?
I don’t want you to fade away
I can taste paradise when I’m with
Oh Yeah
No need for all this
Oh yeah
No need for all this

I’m down on my knees
Pleading for peace
When all I wanna do is the sun go down
See the sun go down

No need for all of this hate
In the end its all down to hate

Liberty is freedom within your heart
Everyone must play their part.

(Chorus)

Time is a Rebel Gun
As bullets rip the sky open
What is that you want me to say?
I don’t want you to fade away
I can taste paradise when I’m with
Oh Yeah
No need for all this
Oh yeah
No need for all this

Your restless soul, I like to watch you wonder
Time is rebel gun, this story’s not ended it’s only begun
A new dawn brings a new day
Don’t fade away don’t fade away

Lyrics by Grace Shackleton

Gracie · 15 Jan 2012, 14:21

do you have a poem or art work that you'd like to share with meat loaf related stuff like photoshop?

or a song I thought it would be fun to start a creative thread hopefully people will write back...

nikox1 · 15 Jan 2012, 18:01

Quote:

Originally Posted by Gracie

do you have a poem or art work that you'd like to share with meat loaf related stuff like photoshop?

or a song I thought it would be fun to start a creative thread hopefully people will write back...

nice lyrics, send them to Meat, in a pm

14 Jan 2012, 11:11	#1
Gracie Super Loafer Join Date: 07.01.2005 Location: Loafdom! Posts: 224	Hi everyone! :) Your opinions mean a lot! I have been writing lyrics for a while. I hope you don't mind me asking you? I wrote this straight after listening to the new album which I like it's, one of the best albums I have heard in years! I'd be so grateful to know what you think about the lyrics. From Grace x 'Rebel Gun'. Your restless soul, I like to watch you wonder Time is rebel gun, this story’s not ended it’s only begun A new dawn brings a new day Don’t fade away don’t fade away You’ve got so much soul, so much grace So beauty in this place You just got to believe Gotta get there before its too late In the end its all all down to fate All the fears in your head They’re just made up, get out of your bed All those tears you make me fill up (Chorus) Time is a Rebel Gun As bullets rip the sky open What is that you want me to say? I don’t want you to fade away I can taste paradise when I’m with Oh Yeah No need for all this Oh yeah No need for all this No more lies They are enemies Wounds that will never heal I wanna feel peace again Not too much to ask Ask God for forgiveness It shall overcome It shall overcome (Chorus) Time is a Rebel Gun As bullets rip the sky open What is that you want me to say? I don’t want you to fade away I can taste paradise when I’m with Oh Yeah No need for all this Oh yeah No need for all this I’m down on my knees Pleading for peace When all I wanna do is the sun go down See the sun go down No need for all of this hate In the end its all down to hate Liberty is freedom within your heart Everyone must play their part. (Chorus) Time is a Rebel Gun As bullets rip the sky open What is that you want me to say? I don’t want you to fade away I can taste paradise when I’m with Oh Yeah No need for all this Oh yeah No need for all this Your restless soul, I like to watch you wonder Time is rebel gun, this story’s not ended it’s only begun A new dawn brings a new day Don’t fade away don’t fade away Lyrics by Grace Shackleton Last edited by Gracie; 14 Jan 2012 at 12:00.

15 Jan 2012, 14:21	#2
Gracie Super Loafer Join Date: 07.01.2005 Location: Loafdom! Posts: 224	calling all artists! do you have a poem or art work that you'd like to share with meat loaf related stuff like photoshop? or a song I thought it would be fun to start a creative thread hopefully people will write back...