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Old 04 May 2003, 16:40   #1
Danny L
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Default O/T: I need someone to compose my song!

Hi there,

This may be a bit unusual, but I didn't know where to put this!!

Below are some potential lyrics for a song. I' can't compose, so can someone do it for me? I'm planning to make a CD, and I would like a MIDI file of the music.

The style i'm hoping for is 'power ballad'

Thanks,
Danny

VERSE 1:
C’mon baby, we’ll be flying tonight
Everything’s gonna be all right
I’ll be there if you get in a fight
The light’s are turned out
We’re all on our own,

BRIDGE:
So c’mon baby
Let’s just try and call this a home
I know it ain’t much
At least no-ones in our way
We can forever touch

CHORUS:
We’re gonna make
some love right now
And if we get caught
We’ll escape somehow
Our love is a secret
Our love is a word
Now we’re saying something
That must not be heard

VERSE 2 (sung by GIRL):
Listen now, honey
Something ain’t right
We ain’t gonna be flying tonight
For I have another one
Trust me – this is gonna be the end of us

BRIDGE (BOY):
But c’mon baby
Let’s just try and call this a home
I know it ain’t much
At least no-ones in our way
We can forever touch

CHORUS:
(Boy) We’re gonna make
some love right now
And if we get caught
We’ll escape somehow
(Girl) Our love is a secret
(Boy) Our love is a word
Now we’re saying something
That must not be heard

EXTRA BIT:
(Boy) Now this might be the last time
We make love on our own
We’re telling all our secret
Then this will be home

(Girl) But what if theirs trouble?
Won’t I have to go
(Boy) They will say whatever
And we’ll say no

(instrumental)

CHORUS:
(Boy) We’re gonna make
some love right now
And if we get caught
We’ll escape somehow
(Girl) Our love is a secret
(Boy) Our love is a word
Now we’re saying something
That must not be heard

(Boy) Oh yeah, don’t say

(Both) A word……..
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Old 04 May 2003, 17:43   #2
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I dont have a clue but the lyrics look good
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Old 04 May 2003, 17:59   #3
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Joker!

We have got a topic (Our Little Poets) in OFF TOPIC section. You can find our poems nad we spoke about Meat would sing a song from them.
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Old 04 May 2003, 18:22   #4
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OKay,

So I don't know my way around yet. (well, >at least remotely funny line here<)

I've posted something in the OT section (lazy little me...)

Regards
Danny
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Old 04 May 2003, 20:26   #5
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Well Danny, don't bother, but i see Whites point. A lot of new members.... and there are allready lots of threads about a lot of subjects.....

So:
The search button is promoted by Meat Loaf himself! Go and find you favo ML topic or other topic by using the search button.
Avalaible for each member in the right upper corner.




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Old 07 May 2003, 20:50   #6
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yeah, but i need a composer - pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssss ssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!! etc...
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Old 07 May 2003, 21:55   #7
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I'll take a look at it tomorrow, see what i can do!!

i promise!
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Old 07 May 2003, 22:25   #8
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Tim, mate, thanks alot - you're an absolute diamond!
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Old 09 May 2003, 22:36   #9
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Okay, as promised... i take a look at The JOkers lyrics.... So i will mix the stuff a bit... let's see:


VERSE 1:
C'mon baby, we'll be flying tonight
Everything's gonna be all right
I'll be there if you get in a fight
The light's are turned out
We're all on our own,

BRIDGE:
So c'mon baby
Let's just try and call this a home
I know it ain't much
At least no-ones in our way
We can forever touch

VERSE 2 (sung by GIRL):
Listen now, honey
Something ain't right
We ain't gonna be flying tonight
For I have another one
Trust me this is gonna be the end of us

BRIDGE (BOY):
But c'mon baby
Let's just try and call this a home
I know it ain't much
At least no-ones in our way
We can forever touch

CHORUS:
We're gonna make
some love right now
And if we get caught
We'll escape somehow
Our love is a secret
Our love is a word
Now we're saying something
That must not be heard

EXTRA BIT:
(Boy) Now this might be the last time
We make love on our own
We're telling all our secret
Then this will be home

(Girl) But what if theirs trouble?
Won't I have to go
(Boy) They will say whatever
And we'll say no

CHORUS:
(Boy) We're gonna make
some love right now
And if we get caught
We'll escape somehow
(Girl) Our love is a secret
(Boy) Our love is a word
Now we're saying something
That must not be heard

(instrumental)

BRIDGE:
So c'mon baby
Let's just try and call this a home
I know it ain't much
At least no-ones in our way
We can forever touch

(instrumental)

CHORUS:
(Boy) We're gonna make
some love right now
And if we get caught
We'll escape somehow
(Girl) Our love is a secret
(Boy) Our love is a word
Now we're saying something
That must not be heard

(Boy) Oh yeah, don't say

(Both) A word'.........


Okay.... this is it!! This is my mix.... LOL.... HOpe it will help you... if not, i will take another look. But maybe it is something to start with.

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