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It really means a lot that you guys like these poems. Thanks for the support. So, for you people, an Exclusive. This is a lyric from our album (M.C.S.).
This one's for you guys: Shine on the light On the day of the dawn On, on, on On, on, on Oh. . . Speak to me Will we ever grow up? No, this is all we'll ever get Turn on your side and say: "Burn me to the ground I don't want to face the world Anymore!" "But you live the life an angel every day Why the tears every night?" Oh. . . Oh, oh lalala By the light of the moon I will sing you every song That's ever been written and ever will So turns your ears to me And I'll whisper in your ear Things you never thought I could say Shine on the light of the dawn everyday! SUNRISE TURNS THE TEARDROPS GOLD! OH NANANA! |
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If I were a better man
I'd call it quits now But I'm not I am weak And meek And I shall inherit the world I'm poor So give us your money! I won't keep it myself I swear I'm sure I'd feel more fulfilled Giving it away on a stupidly large cheque To some old child or other. . . I'll buy an island Somewhere in the pacific Somewhere near Fiji to be quite specific I'll buy a yacht "You'll buy a what!?" A yacht, you see Oh, how dreadfully vulgar. . . But then you see, With all my wealth I'd put my health Upon the shelf And life is killing me. . . Oh. . . |
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I was disappeared in some weeks but at now I'd like to say:
The lines with Joan of Arc are good. But where do you know her hair from? |
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I said her hair because it rhymed! And I thought it was a humerous note to end on.
So, on to another of my little musings (I'll bet you're bored of 'em now huh? Hanging from the gallows tree Is the broken shape of a memory Sun sets grey And fades away The church bells all toll none The burning pyre is deathly cold And you must be looking very old Tonight. . . So sing me to sleep Sing me to sleep And I'll dream of you But you'll never dream of me You see. . . I loved you And you killed me once So I said: "Never again Never again" But I did. . . And you broke my legs this time. . . The nights are getting colder And I'm growing so much older And now I'm dead. . . But you still don't love me. . . But I do. . . |
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Never, ever get bored Eyeore reading your poetry
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cheers!
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Hey! It's some Godawful poem I wrote last week, found it in my notepad just now, and seeing as I have writers block I thought I'd post this poorly expressed social commentary. Enjoy!
MAUDLIN GARDENS Outside the old house With the window; The one with the wooden boards It cannot shield the view of raging hordes Of children with blood in their eyes Who taunt the girls of virgin cries In the rain soaked glowing awe At the gates of Maudlin Gardens All the music in the world Cannot save the lonely ghouls Who burn the flags and skip the schools But it doesn't matter, Because they'll die soon enough Just for being so bloody rough And then their mothers will wonder why And they might just cry (But I doubt it) Sycophantic lacky's cry "Murder 'im!" And he does. . . And the hills are alive with evil cries As the blood is spilt In the flowerbed of Maudlin Gardens |
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Oh! Eyeore I just love Maudlin Gardens, I'm reading Vampires into it
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Vampires eh? Not the original intention but when it comes to it it's open to interpretation. :)
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Please. Someone else post a poem. It's turning itnto Eyeore's poetry corner! :P
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My interpretation 'It cannot shield the view of raging hordes
of children with blood in their eyes. Who taunt the girls of virgin cries' 'Cannot save the lonely ghouls ' 'The hills are alive with evil cries as blood is spilt' or maybe just plain old 'mob rule' I always find it interesting to interpret poems, I look at things in a total illogical way sometimes. But eyeore I love to read your poems, I think you are very talented :) |
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Can't help it. Inspiration hits and I have to write something.
And now for something completely different. Kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss, The morning dew I don't wish this On any of you So don't work here You get paid that much anyway Miss, miss, miss, miss I missed again This, this, this, this This law is broken Tie me to a rock And throw me overboard. |
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Eyeore this is your corner - too rightly so..............
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Eyeore wouldst thou mind if this angel decended upon your corner?
here is a quiet musing of mine Faded Wings The last angel Folds his faded wings There is nothing left on earth He cannot sing He bows his head His world lies bleak and crumbling Our faith has faded Flown away by the winds That whistle passed our eyes Man follows man Humanity has no hands Dull leaves falling fly Like the pieces of our lives The angels voice has gone Hopes gentle tune ne'er to rain Peace upon our lives His wings brush silvered dust That litters the corridors of our mind He knows our ways He knows despair We turn to face the world Thinking man is mighty He turns his back And slowly fades away As our hearts lie blind Gabriel |
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That's a very nice poem there Gabriel. I like that one quite a lot! More poetic than mine
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Well Gabriel looks like your out of a job after reading your poem, but seriously a very commendable effort
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Eyeore it may be your corner but it is a beautiful place.
Gabriel your poem is full of feeling. this is one of two poems that i have written that actually rhyme. Dragon No matter what the feeling Deep down in our hearts A dragon lies slumbering Waiting in the dark In a pool of malice Wallowing in our fears Cruel and unforgiving Its ugly head it rears A tiny spark of hatred Is gleeming in its eye Stirring up our pain Lighting fire that will not die Into a rage of fury Bursting forth in flames Tearing out our heart strings Burning in our veins Its thirst for power endless It bends us to its will We are but slaves Its wishes we fullfill Dragons dancing tumbling Through the sunset sky Laughing ever taunting Daring us to fly... Mee |
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Good stuff again from Meshurp. I've always liked your stuff. Very poetic, in the real sense. Something I can't quite master
Here's an effort though I am the Lord of the Flies I got here because of all the lies And I'll sentence you to en early grave Just because of the way you behave Now who's affraid of the big bad wolf? I know I am So who stands up to the big bad wolf? Sam (I think it was. . . ) These are but contemptable lies You're all a bunch of scrawny flies! And as much as you scratch and itch You'll end up burning in a ditch (for your "crimes") Son, you'll never be King But you may make paperclips someday. . . . P.S. Wasn't very poetic was it? lol |
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Thank you Eyeore!
Your poems are poetic in the real sense not mine, you write poems about things yet you put feeling and meaning in to them. you make people think, you capture a thought and all that comes with that, make it beautifull and share it with the world. now this is something i cannot master and i envy you, i write because i need to put down what im feeling thats not proper poetry. so thank you for liking what i say, but you are the true poet and i admire you work greatly and will say as i have on many occations i can only wish i had you talent. so thank you for letting me read you poetry!! |
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Meshurp, I'm honoured. Maybe Im just one of those overly modest people who don't think they're any good. Oh well. And I think that poetry is about writing how you feel as much as it is about anything else.
I try to write about people, not myself. I try to write, as I've said before, in really simple language, but make it interesting; this must work if you all like my stuff so much. I think this comes from my English literature classes, when the teacher would, in my view, over-analyse poetry. So I tried to make my poetry as easy as possible to understand, this also limits the chances of misinterpretation, but leaves room for personal relevence. Well, that's what I hope for. Glad you enjoy them, and thanks for the support. Here's another. There are a few people in the world Who I'd never want to harm I'd never think of pricking their finger Or breaking their nose And I'll hold them always In my hand In my heart It really doesn't matter As long as they're near me Whether friends or lovers, Sisters or brothers I'll love them all And I'll try to love them better Each and every day In my own special way But you; You're different I'll love you forever And another lifetime after You're there That's all you are I'd never even touch you Because it'd hurt you so (But it doesn't mean I don't want to touch you) But I love you. I love you. And then, You know what? I love you more. |
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Guys, guess we could just agree on the fact that you ALL write great poetry!?
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Sounds ok to me!
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