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Originally Posted by dottie
Eyeore this brought tears to my eyes  |
I agree Dottie, very beautiful, heart felt poem "day after day"..i found it very moving, because it's something i can relate to.
The cold side of the pillow
Provides little comfort
For the thoughts of another day,
Another body-wrecking, soul-corroding day,
I'm feeling so desperately lonely tonight
And there's no one to be seen
There's no one I can dream of
I'll simply stare
And
no
one
really
cares
i understand that feeling all to well.....
The west stabs the sun
It bleeds over the hillsides
Staining them deeply crimson
And the sun dies slowly
nobly
slowly
Same as it ever was
love this description...and
The orange hum of a sun bleached hillside
Glows and beams like an angels wing
The Gods light stars to warm their hands
And blankets of blackness cover the land
amazing and beautiful images/descriptions Eyeore, just love it, you have a real way with words, a real skill at writing i think this poem is one of the most powerful you have written, there's just something about it Eyeore.
Bren