I know, I'm 16, and I am not the best writer in the world. But I had some cool thoughts and images in my head, so I thought I'd share it. Please feel free to give me some CONSTRUCTIVE criticim. This is my first song so please, don't be to hard on me.
:P
Its a little long
Victom Of Reality
Everyday we come to face to face with reality.
Reality is life. It just happens.
There is just no questioning its ways.
Reality can be good and amazing. But for
some of us it can be horrible, scary or bad.
I feel like a victom of reality. When
everything seems to go okay,
something crashes down.- With such
a force- a force that causes
my cloudy eyes to pour out rain.
The rain poors on me, and I
run for shelter someone to call to
but even if I'm under a roof, the rain
of reality still poors on me, there's just
no escaping it!
Its spinning around me in circles.It feels like
being in the eye of a tornado.
Illusions of my fears inside it.
Circling around me, I keep my eyes
on it focusing between the fears,
looking for some good moment to crawl
out too. Above me is endless red
sky in height. Below my feet is
a rock, about to break.
With lava all around it. I can't move anywhere.
Its a wonder why the stone
hasn't broke. Sweat is pouring down
my face, and is crawling down my body.
There seems to be no way out, and my skin is
very hot. Right in front of me drops
a rope, and something heavenly, softly told me to grab it.
I grabbed a hold of the rope and I pulled with all my arm
strength. Slowly I proceed up the rope
I climb and climb knowing reality is
trying to pull me down.I am starting to see brown
pointed mountains miles away,
surrounding the hole I was in. The
red sky made it looked like hell to
be almost at the top. Another 20
feet and I will be there and everything
will be right again. And from the
red sky, what feels like acid rain poors down my sore
arms crawling down pushing my sweat
aside. Thunder crashes, and the rope begins to sway.
I slowly blink once and hope that
when I reopened them the scene would
change. I opened my eyes and as I face
up towards the rope. The rope gains so much tension
it snaps, and as the two pieces separate, I could
have sworn I seen terror's eyes looking at me. The rope above
just slightly moves . I throw the rope
I was holding on to and as I fall with my arms
open wide, my ears go deaf and all I can see
is my body quickly falling. Falling towards the bottom of
where I once stood.
I feel like a victom of reality. When
everything seems to go okay,
something crashes down.- With such
a force- a force that causes
my cloudy eyes pour out rain.
The rain poors on me, and I
run for shelter someone to call to,
but even if I'm under a roof, the rain
of reality still poors on me, there's just
no escaping it! I run from all the bad times.
As it chases me from behind! I go and see
a good time, but it always turns out wrong in
the end. It only happens to me, I just can't take it.
This life of mine Will never be right.
Its not getting better,
and its surely getting worse.
My life flashes by me.
good moments become wrongs!
(SOLO)
And they sung to me!!!
<Believe in your days, and don't fear them.
It will turn out good, if you ignore them.
Believe in what we say, because its true.
Just play the song, that special song, the
one that makes you feel. The one that makes
you feel like everything's okay, and that (CHOIR)
you believe. The heart and soul, put into
the beat, from the voice, that makes you feel.
That life is full, of ups and downs.
And for you right now, your elevators' going down.
But it will soon go up. And it may go down again,
but always remember, it will always end up, going up!>
<fast>
Life threw me a bike, and I'm crusing it down my path.
A path of ups, and no downs. Everything is great, wind
blowing through my hair. A grin on my face. And on
this sunny roadway off to the side. There's a young
girl my age, who wants a ride on my motorbike.
I said, "Sure why not, hop on and we can go for a ride
where abouts you going!" She said, "Take me where your
going, I want to leave here. My life here is boring and
life is tearing me down." I said I'd take her with me,
I could sure use the company. I'll make your life better,
and at the same time I'll be going to change my life.
Reality threw me pain, of tears, and years of scare.
Well now, I don't care. Because where I'm going will be
better. I'm leaving this town,
to find some better times.
(normal)
Cause it ain't getting any
better here. Oh no, it ain't
getting better here!
No its not!
oh, no its not.
Getting...better...here.
Getting better here.
(Well if you got this far, please give me any comments, or adjustments on what I could do in future songs, or what I could fix on this one. Thanks.