To me, it seems in tune and in time, and you are certainly getting in character! You also don't attempt to exactly replicate Meat's performance, and sing it your way, which is great.
For me however, the performance is a little... idiosyncratic... a little too OTT... for mass consumption perhaps. But it's one helluva distinctive and unique style, and I certainly wouldn't say "go bland". Just maybe reign it in a little tiddly bit.
And I agree with RadioMaster about lessons to the extent that volume control techniques may be beneficial - nothing wrong with the core singing, just a little tweaking I think.
PS I've tried to be helpful as I like singing myself, but I haven't had lessons and don't know the technical side, so my advice could well be pants. Or not.
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