first draft of statment- wot u think??
ok folks managed to get a rough 1st draft of my personal statment. still missing some info tho. please let me kno wot you think.
I am now eighteen years old and about to complete a full-time course in NQ preparation for child care at SCQF level 5. I have succeeded in achieving all goals set throughout the course. I am now going on to do a National Certificate in child care and early education SCQF level 6 at Forth Valley College. In the future I see myself as a general nurse within a care setting, giving something worthwhile back to the community, which has itself, given much to me throughout my formative years.
I was educated at Sunnyside Primary school and Alloa Academy where I achieved the aforementioned qualifications. I would consider the fact that I have an intermediate two in care, a bonus in aiding my nursing training.
I wish to complete my diploma in nursing, maintain and develop my nursing skills, and by doing so, further my career. I can see myself undertaking a Masters Degree in either Nursing or Midwifery in the not too distant future.
In conclusion, I am a naturally caring person and believe that everyone should receive the best care possible. I am also an enthusiastic learner and wish to learn as much as I can in order to develop myself and career. I am a hard working and adaptable person who is determined to forge a successful career for herself within the nursing profession. I trust this personal statement is both informative and enlightening, should any further information be required, I will be more than happy to provide it.
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