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Originally Posted by White of High
Yes Bren! It wanted to be that line. I will correct it.
And please, let me my mistakes! I have to know what must I correct!
And thanks your words!
Anybody knows a good composer?
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White Of High,
to say "You think to be left by the God"even though not everyday /correct English,was still a very beautiful way of saying ,you think you are abandonded by God.
For me to correct or criticise what you have written would be wrong.,it is beautiful in it's own right,as it is.