Giving Tree: Wario's Extended Version
 

Tell me what you think of it. I LOVE the song, just thought Id add a few things. :-P

https://soundcloud.com/warioloaf/giv...tended-version

:yawn: I turned off during the speech.

Have to say I did too .. my whytf for today I guess ;) I love the song too .. monologue doesn't add anything for me I'm afraid

I think your intro goes for too long (although if you could add something else over the top the second / third time through it would be better), and I don't think going back to the chorus at the end of the clapping really adds anything to the song, but I actually love the speech. That was a cool touch, imo :D

Sorry but I think the song is absolutely perfect the way it is, and won't listen.

I agree the song is perfect as it is

The Biblical intro needs some snag to it, you know like Jim's monologue Life, Death, and a American Guitar. Have a vocalist who puts passion into it with some background effects to increase its potency. The intro the way it is just makes it seem too... religious. The Extended part is basically a cut into the ending choir again with a edited end which doesn't sound quite right. You should work on making transitions more seamless.

I get what you were trying to acheive with this but I think you complicated a simple arrangement in my opinion. Not saying I didn't enjoy it but it was too complicated for a simple arrangement