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Heli 05 Feb 2006 23:57

Here's another new crap one by moi.

I'm the fraud.

I'm the fraud.

While I live my life, I noticed something.
I saw that I'm not who you think i am.
It doesn't bother me...but I just wish I could correct you.
I wish I could tell you who I really am,
just so your judgement can be accurate.

I hope your judgement is accurate.
I think I like the way you see me.
I dont really like looking in the mirror.
I would much rather look at you and get verbal feedback.
Physical feedback....scared and shaking in anticipation.
I tend to like that coming from you.


Just why does everyone say the same?
Just because you all say it, doesn't mean it's true does it?
It doesn't mean I'm really like that...does it?
Oh for heavens sake just stop it...I want to think about you...
...work you out and not me!
You're such a lovely audience...
Lovely lovely people...but hmmm...
...maybe you don't think the same.
Maybe you're a fraud too??

Who are we really?

Pseudo intellects...
...or bona fide folly?

Bren 06 Feb 2006 16:43

great to see poems being posted..Rob and Heli :D

Heli 07 Feb 2006 00:25

Here's one I wrote a while back about a boy I like....but it turns out he doesn't like me! lol. I'm sure many people get this feeling when they have someone on their mind.


Sleepless Nights

I am not heavy nor am I light,
When I creep upon you at night.
I stay up here to drive you mad,
but you must admit I'm not that bad.

With every breath you while away,
Just thinking of him every day.
What will happen? You can't see,
When I cause you little sleep.

So stay awake and feed me more,
I love to be a perfect bore.
I'm not a man that's easily fought,
I'm merely just a love sick thought!

Jackoutofhell 04 May 2006 19:20

The Future Awaits
 
My friend was undergoing some hard times a few months ago, and I wrote him a poem to lift his spirits. He has been doing much better lately, so I decided to write a sequel. Below are the two poems, both written fairly quickly, but very important to me. Please comment. I'm currently working on a bizzare short story. I may post it here if I feel so inclined.

You Can Overcome

Day by day you live your life
You live in pain, you live in strife

Wanting so desperately to be free
Wanting to run, wanting to flee

Telling yourself that it will be okay
Fighting to make it through the day

Your life is running all too fast
You hope this night will be your last

Crying for help from an unknown place
Looking for something that you can embrace

You seem content, filled with pride
No one can see your other side

Hoping and longing for that beautiful day
When all your pain will drift away

You sit alone, isolated and numb
For fear that day will never come

If you pay attention then you'll see
This is not what you are meant to be

From here on out, it's what you instill
You can overcome, and I know you will

The Future Awaits

The fear is gone, the joy is here,
Your mind is set to rest.

The mark is made, the battle won,
You've finally aced the test.

But keep it up, don't stow away
and let the past draw near.

Just rev it up, and let it go,
and leave the car in gear.

The price is paid, you owe no more,
Just seize the light of day.

Cherish the future, play the cards,
Don't let it slip away.

Go ahead and take your time,
the end is not so dear.

Remember what you'll always have,
A friendship that's sincere.

Jackoutofhell 04 May 2006 23:18

And this: just typical country lyrics:

A Sad Poem

I sit all alone in my chair here at home
Been drinking and crying now that you´re gone

I can´t stand to think of what happened that night
The way that you left, man it just wasn´t right

I thought that you loved me, but I guess I was wrong
So now I´m just sittin here singing this song

If I could go back, then God knows I would
If only I´d known you were up to no-good

You´ve wasted my life and taken from me
All of this pain, I´m no longer free

I kind of feel sorry, but I don´t know why
I should just be happy that you said goodbye

At this point, you know I don´t really care
All I can do is just sit here and stare

I don´t want to talk and I dont want to think
Maybe I should just go and have me a drink.

A Tribute To Writing.Com

I was surfing the net the other night
when I came across this awesome site

What it claimed just couldn't be true
A place to write, and forums too?

The community seemed to be fairly large
and better yet, its free of charge?

It seemed that something just couldn't be right
Could it be a scam? No, not quite!

I posted a poem and popped in to say "Hey"
I had 4 reviews by the very next day!

The members were friendly and the mods were nice
all this support for such a cheap price?

I now visit there every night
Will I upgrade? yeah I might!

I'll tell ya man, if literature is what ya know
then Writing.com is the place to go!

----

Wouldn't take those too seriously, but they were fun.

Rob The Badger 05 May 2006 05:24

Where the heck is the Our Little Poet's thread?
Good poems, love. Keep it up.

Rob The Badger 05 May 2006 05:31

I don't want this wonderful thread to get lost again...

x Bobby

AndyK 05 May 2006 09:53

Threads merged.


Here's my little contribution ...

To write a haiku
in less than
sixteen syllables
is very diffic

Rob The Badger 07 May 2006 05:10

the beginning was a disaster
as i slipped under the water
you brought my head from under
the rushing bay blue river
you placed your lips on mine
i opened my eyes for the first time
opened to my heaven

calling through the forest
the rain falls heavy downward
cowering under maple leaf
acting as umbrella

walking talking standing marching singing lazing bleaching searching
calling falling trawling falling stop
do do do do too late

you fall down
you fell down the bankment and i saved you once before
i've not enough left in my arms to pull you back up once again
now i'm your heaven you're my hell and there's a tree trunk in between us

falling down again to be with you won't help me now
so i'm going home for tea perhaps i'll see you on the weekend

amethyst 07 May 2006 06:36

Trust and love, love and trust
Sex and love, love and lust
Give and take, take it all
Lift me up, let me fall
Take my heart, let it break
I was real, you were fake
Time to go, left alone
Nothing left, heart of stone
Let me go, set me free
I am here, I am me.

29th April 2006

dottie 07 May 2006 14:14

Quote:

Originally Posted by dottie
I would hope one day to have some of my words put to music - DESPAIR - Sadness comes all to often for me,
A light on the horizon I cannot see,
Is this how things are meant to be?
Each morning as it dawns,
Full of hope I pray -
Happiness and contentment may come my way.
But once again my wishes are jaded,
As another day passes and hope has faded,
Happiness in this life is not for me,
I can see it all now -
So please let me be.

Wrote this at my lowest ebb........

I posted this in 2003 - re-surfaced in 2006........

dottie 07 May 2006 14:16

Quote:

Originally Posted by dottie
LIFE

I wish - I wish - I Wish,
A thousand miles away from here,
with our two children Oh so dear,
A sun that sets in a peaceful sky,
and leaves me asking Why? Why? Why?
Will we ever feel the gladness?
or are we destined for a life of sadness.
The future holds no threat for me
it is only to clear to see - to see.
Perhaps one day the sun will shine
in a way to be almost sublime,
and at that moment I will know how this life might try to grow,
and fulfil dreams as of yet undreamed

posted 2003 - re-surfaced 2006

It is said that if you wait long enough dreams will fulfil themselves.......

dottie 07 May 2006 14:17

Quote:

Originally Posted by dottie
The end of the road

He doesn't love me anymore
That I know for sure
He sees me as a waste of space
not wanted in his life

He puts me down
When I act like a clown
He cann't bear for me to be happy

He sees me as a millstone
forever around his neck
I wish I could escape this life with him

I've given him all I can
I cann't give anymore
That I know for sure

posted 2003 - re-surfaced 2006

Thank god I have moved on since I wrote this........

dottie 07 May 2006 14:22

Quote:

Originally Posted by dottie
Future

Dare I wonder
Dare I perceive
A happier life if I should leave

A day thats filled with Joy and gladness
Not hopefulness and untold sadness

Give me the courage
Give me the hope
With this future life
I know I can cope

posted 2003 - re-surfaced 2006

wrote this after leaving my foster parents........

dottie 07 May 2006 14:23

Quote:

Originally Posted by dottie
Can you not see?

Days of sunlight and joy,
were all I knew when I met you boy,
Yes, you gave me the world and everything in it,
It was never enough for me, can you not see.

The years rolled by and the yearning became stronger,
It was never enough for me, can you not see.

My bags were packed and ready,
A last wave, the tears flowed, but I couldn't stay,
It was never enough for me, can you not see.

posted 2003 - re-surfaced 2006

In memory of a lost love.........

dottie 07 May 2006 14:26

Quote:

Originally Posted by dottie
This was dedicated to my late mum in law( an absolutely super person) by her husband.

MY DARLING

My Darling, My Darling,
You gave me the love that I was forever searching
Life became alive once more
When once again you opened the door to the treasure of heart, and the love of yourself
Yes dear I became alive once more.

The men recently in your life are lucky too
as they have known you through and through
They may have been good and kind, and left a slight pang for you in the past, now behind.

But ask yourself dear, did they not have their chance?
Or did they only want a sly romance?
Or did they only need their ego blue?
And not really want a permantly you.

My Darling, My Darling,
Don't ever lock me out
Give me your love, and you will see me true.

My Darling, My Darling,
On this birthday of yours, which I shall share,
and in sickness or health, I shall always care,
So don't chase moonbeams of bygone days,
Else you'll end up in a permanent haze.

My Darling, My Darling,
My Home, My Life, My Love is yours,
Not much to offer, no riches, or wealth
Just me, just me, just myself.

My Darling, My Darling,
Give me all of yourself, and you shall be my goddess of love,
Flying into my life and never out,
So that I can chant to the world what my love is all about.
Yours eyes are lovely and truly blue,
When thoughts of love enter you,
So keep them for me this way dear,
For no other and deeply clear.

My Darling, My Darling.

posted 2003 - re-surfaced 2006

the words speak for themselves.....

Alas my father in law passed away also a few years ago........ (the closest I have been to someone whom I regarded as a father)

Rob The Badger 08 May 2006 15:16

bump

dottie 08 May 2006 19:31

what do I care?

where are you?
mother dear,
dead or alive,
never knowing.

what do I care?

so near,
yet so far,
just around the corner,
or 1,000 miles away?

what do I care?

why did you leave me?
walked out of my life,
not looking back,
ne'er a backward glance.

what do I care?

Yes, I do regardless,
if you're out there somewhere,
I'll find you,
and embrace the love,
which we thought was lost.

dottie 23 May 2006 18:21

what am I looking for?

Is it just around the corner?
Or is it a thousand miles away?

what am I looking for?

peace of mind, does it exist?

what am I looking for?

clarity of thought, definition of the future..

what am I looking for?

how do I accept lifes hand..

what am I looking for?

Rob The Badger 25 May 2006 03:54

There are times when it feels like
the dice are loaded
lady luck is out on the town
the cards aren't in your favour
or your time is running out

well I've some words for you
'Don't pull your punches,
play the player not the game,
listen to your music an sing your song,
it won't be long until we're all talking'



RSG 07 Jul 2006 11:52

Good Morning...

And a crow calls out

Out my mother's window when the sun is hiding proud.
on a clear mid-morning with little cloud
Touched by light scatters right out my window.
I cannot tell where he's looking about
And the crow calls out.

In his bed, folded nose cold
In his cotton soft blue clothes
Watches the blackbird resting upon a tree arm,
As an older gentleman looks out where he is laid warm.
And a crow calls out.

They now share a life together, a sacred plan.
Most beautiful bride of a woman, and groom of a man.
As she walks down the aisle she looks at her mother and smiles.
A little girls fairytale is made
And a crow calls out.

A new born Daddy looks down towards the reversed side of the glass.
It was a long night and it was a long time since he's seen his own dad.
Leaving him with a feeling with absense he replaces with a new path.
Not hating the man who was never around when he needed him real bad
And a crow calls out.

He lays in a situation in which he can't choose.
He played the game and he knows he didn't loose.
There isn't anything left for him he wish to do.
So he lays down to rest, no need to be depressed
He exhales his last breath, loved ones mournes his death.
And a crow calls out.

RSG

dottie 07 Jul 2006 11:54

Quote:

Originally Posted by dottie
what do I care?

where are you?
mother dear,
dead or alive,
never knowing.

what do I care?

so near,
yet so far,
just around the corner,
or 1,000 miles away?

what do I care?

why did you leave me?
walked out of my life,
not looking back,
ne'er a backward glance.

what do I care?

Yes, I do regardless,
if you're out there somewhere,
I'll find you,
and embrace the love,
which we thought was lost.

I wanted to bump this poem because I now have information which could lead me to my mama......

JanT 07 Jul 2006 14:05

A couple of months ago, our English tutor came into the room with a carrier bag and asked all the students to put in their hands and take out whichever object they first touched. We all complied. Then she told us, our assignment for the day was to write a personification poem about that object.

I got a tatty old tea towel.

Here is my effort.

Just an old, unwanted tea towel

Edges fray, they say, with age
Well mine are fraying too.
In days gone by,
My hems were neat
But now…
They’re tattered through

Colour fades, they say, with age
Well mine is fading too
There was a time,
I dried the pots
And now…
I wipe a shoe

Those were the days, they say, with age
Well those were my days too
I used to be put out to dry,
Yet now…
I seldom do.

And as my final days drew near…
My useful life all fin…

I found my final resting place
Was in a rubbish bin
<sigh>

RSG 07 Jul 2006 14:32

Nice heh :D

Jackoutofhell 19 Jul 2006 10:45

I like that. :D While struggling with another poem, I decided to write this little diddy so I could get back to work.

Utter Arrogance

A bitter mind, a perfect life
transgressions, have you none?
a constant need to wield your knife
and face the morning sun

The world is yours, a squirrelly phrase
and one to use with care
for if you have no humble days
the rest will lose its flair

Don't turn around and take the chance
the earth is not your own
you'll never laugh and sing and dance
while sitting all alone

For what shall come of sly remarks
scorn and steep self praise?
a daunting post, a pool of sharks
a void to fill your days?

But in the end, the choice is yours
you know which path you'll choose
to flow along and hide your pores
or pay your entry dues

==========

And no, I'm NOT angry right now, hahaha.


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