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Gracie
22 Apr 2012, 12:39
Hi Everyone

I wrote this Song and because of meat working with various people I wrote this. I don't like to advertise my stuff online but sometimes you have no choice if your gonna be heard. If you can offer opinions would be cool to know what you all think as I value your opinions being a fellow meat loaf fan!

For the record I wrote to patti in (2008ish) on her official myspace page as I wrote her a song well just the words and she said she liked it was a dream!
:D a real inspiration...

There Ain't No Pleasure Without Sin

Lyrics Grace Shackleton




There's something I wanna tell you
holding these feelings inside
does no one any favors
And it's so cruel
but baby you need to know the truth
I need you
There Ain't no mistake
I need you,

So hold on
I know I'm strong but I need you to
Pull me through
What do I have to do?
To shake these fears away
To Make These fears fall Away-(fall away)
So many sleepless nights

Offer you shelter from the storm
Turn the dream into a prayer
where do we start?
It's in My heart
I don't know even when to begin
There Ain't No Pleasure Without Sin
There Ain't No Pleasure Without Sin

(Chorus)

There Ain't No Pleasure Without Sin
There ain't no pleasure without Sin
In the end everything fades to black
What do I have to do to get you back?
repeat x2

Through the Wind and the rain
I need to feel you close again
Fading to black
fades to black...

(Chorus)

There ain't no pleasure without Sin
There ain't no pleasure without Sin
In the end everything fades to black
What do I have to do to get you back?

I ain't waiting in the shadows but
I keep what I feel for you inside
field of desire, field of desire,
& I wanna let you know you're
In My Soul
Break out of the light
and dream through the night


Just like a field of desire, field of desire,
Burning fire on the wind blowing in the night

(Repeat Chorus)

© G Shackleton 2009

nikox1
22 Apr 2012, 23:36
its not bad at all, i do a bit of writing myself:D

robgomm
23 Apr 2012, 10:23
I think that's really good actually, could be epic. Sounds like a very long song.

ninja
23 Apr 2012, 20:57
great lyrics ... seams to be an epic song ... i'd really like to hear it!