Lyrics for Meat Loaf

[White of High]

Hi Everybody!
I'd like to know Meat's (or Jim's) songs make you write songs or lyrics?
I was writing a text for Meat Loaf. It seems like Anything For love but not about love...
Well, here is a long lyrics what Mead should sing... if anybody could compose a melody for it...

Please, let me if you find mistakes in the text (grammar or words) and we will rewrite...


The Silent Man

The Earth is going and the twigs are being swayed
Buildings are crumbling and after every pained
The Silent Man lies in a pool of blood
You think you've been abandoned by God

And wasted years occur to me
Aware of shade of death revive memory
When I handed my friend over to the land
Because he belonged to another band
I owed him a debt of gratitude
But this was the slogan: “You win if you’ve aptitude”
And I was crying, I was shedding a tear
Something was breaking and I was seized by fear

I dropped next to his unspoiled body
And I absorbed in the sea of shame
Never, my soul never will be out of money
I gaoled a youth and I spoiled his game
I was running and running to the world
I hoped to could hide from my conscience
But I never feel to free myself like a bird
My lament heart will be reduced to exigence

The Earth is going and the twigs are being swayed
Buildings are crumbling and after every pained
The Silent Man lies in a pool of blood
You think you've been abandoned by God

Then I’ve remained silent and no said nevermore
I sank into myself and I’ve started the tor
It was his dream that he climbs the mountain
Pounce on all rocks and touch every quoin
Once I stood above his tomb and was praying
At the time the flowers dried and the fog was falling
There was something in the icy wind
I knew that no pardon and I was just diving

As far as I thought that I was damned
I spoke the act for nobody
But I’ve never thrown in my hand
Now and then inside here the other-world’s melody
sounds and torments me
My cry drifts away like an elegy
The fact hangs me in effigy
The time’s my mortal enemy

The leafs were falling off and the hope was frozen
But the sky’s kept silent and God’s not sent any omen
The Silent Man sat in rocker at the death’s door
His life passed by like current next to the shore

Have you ever seen the light?
Have you never been in night?
I’m short of breath without a break
I wish I’d live at the bottom of a lake
I would be the mud and the God would be the whirlpool
Then I ain’t wear a hood like one of the old school
And I ain’t wait the Lord comes on the scene
I ain’t want to be a silver-mounted epitaph as sin

Oh Silent Man! Oh Silent Man!
I ain’t like to die alone
I had got an elfin dream
I’m living in the middle of everything forever
Between sky and land I was the seam

Oh Silent Man! Oh Silent Man!
I will scoff at the wasted past
I will draw up the shaded blind
And ask to stars some questions
Why has changed my state of mind?
Why does it down late at night?
Why do I feel so that I mustn’t pay the tithe?

The gate of heaven’s opening and ground is drowning apart
And destructive firestorm is breaking somebody’s heart
The Silent Man stagger to his feet but
You still think you've been abandoned by God

His glaring glory’s hypnotizing me
I am hearing my destiny

God:
I ain’t detain you
You derive from calm
This world is your again on his way home

Silent Man:
You strike me with terror
I feel me in a hole

God:
Will you are a just person!
No roam more knight errant!
I liberate you out of fetters – my servant

Silent Man:
I think I’m dreaming now
I don’t follow why and how

God:
Explode the cosmos there inside!
Knock against your soul with the space
But I want to hear some prayer in any case

Silent Man:
I promise for you
I give it your due

God:
No make a reply to the evil
And the Earth will be burst into flame by candle
You suddenly saw a light at the end of the tunnel

Silent Man:
Give me just another world
I know you’re as good as your word

The earthquake was at an end
But the peaceful town is rent
The ice reckon with the fire
Devise reckon with desire
Everywhere blood and everywhere pain
In the dying eyes – there is stinging disdain
Damn it! Hey God! Go to Hell!
In the blazing wind – here is Lucifer

Lucifer:
Give me your irretrievable soul
I ain’t flutter the dovecotes
I announce the peace of holiness
The white color changes the black cause

Silent Man:
I don’t believe in you
You’re spark out of the blue

Lucifer:
Nobody like you in the ghost city
Your life’s been a blot on your copybook
You’ll drown into the shame
I could give you a peaceful nook

Silent Man:
I don’t believe in you
You’re spark out of the blue

Lucifer:
I’m not a devil
He’s living at the top
I’m just a diamond in a jeweler’s
But you are a schlemiel on the dock

Silent Man:
I don’t believe in you
You’re blur out of the blue

Lucifer:
What would you go against
with the stream?
It isn’t your most ardent wish
Come to your sense! It ain’t your dream

Silent Man:
It maybe true
Oh no, you’re blur out of the blue

The waves dash over my head
I ain’t sure of myself
I consider it new
Like an early dew
I feel the recoil of my own folly
My skull will be hurt by holly
No matter how heaven or hell
I’ll be content everywhere and it’s novel

Darkness past and darkness future
The darkness present read me a lecture
The Silent Man step over a threshold of death
And under the ruin he goes through his final breath…

[Rob The Badger]

Good stuff that. Long 8O .

[White of High]

Like Anything For Love...
I think a 12-15 minutes music would be good for it!

[Rob The Badger]

Indeed.

[Bren]

White Of High, I read The Silent Man, then i read it again and again. I think you think much,think deeply and you have the soul of a poet,White Of High.

Some of your lyrics that i find particularly beautiful are;

"I had got an elfin dream
I'm living in the middle of everything forever
Between sky and land i was the seam.."

"The gate of Heaven's opening and ground is drowning apart
And destructive firestorm is breaking somebody's heart."

"Darkness past and darkness future
The darkness present read me a lecture
The Silent Man steps over a threshold of death
And under the ruin he goes through his final death"

"Now and then inside here the other-world's melody
sounds and torments me..."

Also powerful words,

"Everywhere blood everywhere pain
in the dying eyes-there is stinging disdain.."

You write with feeling White Of High.
there are some parts where i do not understand what you are trying to convey/say.i do not mean that as a criticism.
The line "you think to be left by the God"I ,take it as meaning ,you think you have been abandoned by God, am i right?Ido not wish to criticise or correct your grammer etc as it would spoil what you have written which is beautiful in it's own right.

[dottie]

Awesome White of High - Such depth of emotion - I hope someone comes back to you on this - you really do deserve to have this song published

[White of High]

Yes Bren! It wanted to be that line. I will correct it.
And please, let me my mistakes! I have to know what must I correct!
And thanks your words!
Anybody knows a good composer?

[Bren]

Yes Bren! It wanted to be that line. I will correct it.
And please, let me my mistakes! I have to know what must I correct!
And thanks your words!
Anybody knows a good composer?

White Of High,
to say "You think to be left by the God"even though not everyday /correct English,was still a very beautiful way of saying ,you think you are abandonded by God.
For me to correct or criticise what you have written would be wrong.,it is beautiful in it's own right,as it is.

[White of High]

Thanks Bren!
Just I don't know very well the grammar. And that sentence is meaningless and I think there are more wrong sentence...
If you find more please write for me!

[Rob The Badger]

I may be able to find some composers. I know a few bands who I write for, they may be able to cook something up for you. I'll get back to you on that.

[White of High]

Here's another:

Shadow In The Dark


Shadow in the dark…

I wish she holds out her arm
But a wolf’s whining in the wood
From there an owl hooting
And it’s troubling me
But I look out of the window
Sign’s being sent by the above
And stare at the sky
A shining band and a shooting star

And now my body’s bursting into flames
In my memories the lies are tinklin'
and bringing to mind her face
But disappear like water in the race
The tide’s sweeping me away
In the shape of a comet a fay
into my life give back Satiny Ray
Oh my soul brought to bay
I will battle with myself
Pay attention every abbey!
Every god and everything that is holy
Everything that’s sacred
Excuse my being late
I was locked up with a gate
And with a key in the shade
I defeat the taint, I take it!

I have no need of shelter
All the river channel
I’m sick of the bitterness
I see the end of the tunnel
It will be the last journey

Shadow in the dark…

I wish she holds out her arm
But a wolf’s whining in the wood
From there an owl hooting
It’s no troubling me
I see the angels flying
Like the wise eagles
I believe in the marvels
Her immortal love rankles

Wait me darling!
I’m between life and death
Wait a minute!
I make for you at full pelt
I battled with me
Could you see it abbey?
Every god and everything that is holy
Every sky and ever worthy
I have found me.

I wish she holds out her arm
But a wolf’s whining in the wood
From there an owl hooting
It’s no troubling me…

[Bren]

beautiful words/images White of High

[White of High]

Bren!
Thanks the words and thanks your help!

The lines wanna be them:
In my memories the lies are tinklin'
and bringing to mind her face

So, is it clear?

[Bren]

It makes more sense like that, White

[CarolM]

well done white of high :lol: they are very good.

[Michel]

White, you're talented. You've written some great lyrics.

[White of High]

Thanks the good words!
But I need a band who would play them!
And here is the next after Jim Steinman! It sounds well like a speech...

So Many Suffering

The bleeding sun shines on the sky
It’s might will pulverized with lightning
And the Mount Everest grows dark
Up there demons ~~~~~~~s’ are flying
But the rambling does the right thing

He springs onto the Harley
Rumbles its voice
And open a way to heaven
Aim high, but he’s denied the doors

Evil intention's on the graves
The crucifix is pierced with a bloody sword
And magic symbols with some braves
Say one’s prayers to a willing lord

The heroes swear to do the memories
And make a promise for the dying men
That fight for peace
If it must he’ll try again and again

The modern knight with diamond-light blade
Says jinx to hell’s messengers
Harmful ghosts are laughing heartily
Loudly like a rifle with two chambers

An eddy rips away the motorcycle
Tumble and tumble in deep
And run down his life
The evil powers reap and reap

Indian’s and Harley’s soul join on clouds
Whereas the bodies are lifeless
But the stars are raising from the dead
And the heart under the ribs ain’t homeless

Oh heart, slave of Victory
Peace is your territory
Truth has been proved with history
But the Vicious lives here in us neighborhood

The wood’s burning under the Moon
But Forbidden Tree’s in flame
And a serpent like a torch
Whom the icefield can tame
The death held mirror before the demons
Needless every weapons
The dark does away with itself
Throw into the deep abyss off rockshelf

And only see now
That how sensitive it’s been
Under the land lie low
It will be there very keen

Oh hero, you are divinity
Descended to join us from the sky
Fettered the Evil
You’ll never rob us soul on the sly
So many skeletons amputated the past
So many skulls smile into the future
So many hearts sleep the sleep of the just
So many bloods were shedded by like a shooter
So many suffering are a must?

The Devil’s already in the last repose
Adam and Eve would try again because
the peace entered the lists
Thank you! – the champion of justice

Remember! Resurrection’s eternal…

[meshurp]

White of High you are amazing!!!!

these are all wonderful! i wish i had your talent at this. you are definately gifted, to be able to sculpt words like this is truely magic!!!!

[Bren]

Good White Of High, but i personally prefer,The Silent Man and Shadow In The Dark.

[White of High]

Something is happening with The Silent Man...

[Bren]

Something is happening with The Silent Man...

:??: i am intrigued .








Bren

[Tim]

White, great stuff!!! saw some amazing stuff here.... really good.

[White of High]

I really hope it will be a big suprise...

[rockfenris2005]

'Twill be on my epic album NATURE'S SIEGFRIED as the closing number.
And YES - White of High is a genius. I wish I could show you my lyrics,
but I've been advised not to do so - in case someone would steal them.
BUT - I'll post the ones that are copyright (not all of them, I'm afraid)

Some of my songs are:

NOSFERATU (The Musical)

PROLOGUE
MIDNIGHT SERENADE
EN ROUTE TO ORLOCK'S FORTRESS
FINE CHOICE OF WORDS
RATS IN THE UPPER STOREY
FINE CHOICE OF WORDS (Reprise)
DAMNED FOR ALL ETERNITY
LINGER OF SEDUCTION
THE CHAINS OF THE NIGHT
PRESENTIMENT OF EVIL
THE CHAINS OF THE NIGHT (REPRISE)
VENTURING THE FORTRESS
FINE CHOICE OF WORDS (REPRISE)
TEENAGE VAMPSTER
DEMETER IN A MAELSTROM
NO REST FOR THE WICKED
WHERE ARE WE?
CHAINED APOSTLE
LOVE DUET
THROUGH THE GATES OF HELL
HEAVEN'S GARDEN
CONFRONTATION
DON'T BE AFRAID
SOMETIMES
BACK INTO THE LIGHT
THE DEATH OF ORLOCK
EPILOGUE

DON CLAUDE DEVIOUS (Another Musical)

OVERTURE
REAR END OF LIFE
THE RELICS OF TRAGEDY
BLACK FOREST OF EVIL
CRY OF THE POOR
READY FOR THE FUTURE
DREAM POLLUTION (devoted to JD)
ROCK SOLID DEVIANT
THE DAY OF THE DEVIL
EMILY'S PRAYER
SET THE NIGHT ON FIRE
THE GATES OF HELL
WELCOME TO YOUR WORST NIGHTMARE
DARK NIGHT
EMILY
BLACK CATHEDRAL
DAMNED FOR ALL ETERNITY
PARADOX AND PAIN
TRIBULATION
UNTIL THE FAT LADY SINGS
RITUAL OF TORMENT
RAZOR BLADES
THE BATTLE
EMILY (REPRISE)
READY FOR THE FUTURE (REPRISE)
KISS THE NIGHT GOODBYE'

[White of High]

Yes, it's on.

Rockfenris!
You didn't answer my question. Do you need more endless :)) lyrics?

[evil nickname]

I wish I could show you my lyrics,
but I've been advised not to do so - in case someone would steal them.
BUT - I'll post the ones that are copyright (not all of them, I'm afraid)

Ryan, would I make sense if say that *all* your songs are automatically protected by copyrights, from the instant they're created, until 70 years after your death?
If not, I'd suggest you'd need to read up on copyright law. Basic knowledge of how copyright works is, imho, essential for all artists.
Believe me... you'd be happy you did.

William

[rockfenris2005]

Endless lyrics?
Not yet...

[White of High]

Like The Silent Man...

[White of High]

Hi everybody!
Here is the next endless lyrics... but maybe not for Meat Loaf.
Ryan, please respond to my mail!


World Without Scream


And the thunder's flashing on the sky
The clouds are swimming behind a grayed face
He knows he's fallen into disgrace with heaven
And his stare into space

He folds his hands for prayer day after day
But sky is quiet so he goes his own deserted way
When the tears wouldn't come out his eyes
Suddenly he starts to be on the rise

At now he gave up his driftless life
He's running with angelic dream
He knows he will arrive
To another world without scream
The fairyland is opening its gate
Inside his heart there's the beam
To walk is never too late
In another world without scream

He has never gleamed in the light
He has drowned in the sea of pain
In his life the lonely was the bright
His only mate was the refreshing rain

Once in a blue moon it has stopped raining
And the sun has appeared suddenly from the greyness
Then on the water of hope he is sailing
From himself he kills off the faithless

At now he gave up his driftless life
He's running with angelic dream
He knows he will arrive
To another world without scream
The fairyland is opening its gate
Inside his heart there's the beam
To walk is never too late
In another world without scream

The clouds have cleared forever
And a ray's illumining the land
An angel emerged like a queen
With flaming body he has scanned
For the other world without scream

Angel
Why do you mean with dark glances
when your dreams would come true?

Man
Cause eternal pain is my friend
ever since I can remember!

Angel
And did you live your life
between tears and fears all through?

Man
I did not request from others
they set fire to the candle!

Angel
And if I'd say you the gates of heaven
is opening in front of you?

Man
I'd said I don't believe in you!

Angel
And if I'd say oneself the Lord waits -
what yould you do?

Man
I'd give me its due!

Angel
What are you waiting for?
Go with the celestial stream!

Man
If you promise to me it will be a
world without scream...


And he is standing on the top of the world
With opened heart in front of God
In full glory he's as good as his word
Entering its realm with stormy blood
and say:

Man
At now I give up my driftless life
I'm running with angelic dream
I know I will arrive
To another world without scream

God
And you don't need me anymore
You will carry through your dream

Man
The fairyland was opening its gate
Inside my heart there's the beam
To walk would be my fate
In another world without scream

God
I see you won't to go with the stream


And he's closed the door and opened his eyes
He set off his way
With a smile on his face he's thrown off disguise
And he lives with a ray
With a sigh of relief he has noted he's a wise
And he knows he won the day
Once in blue moon he praises to the skies
He don't need to say

At now I give up my driftless life
I will run with angelic dream
I know I will arrive
To another world without scream
The fairyland will open its gate
Inside my heart there'll be the beam
To walk will be my fate
In another world without scream... without scream... without scream...

[Bren]

Beautiful, White of High


A question for you, can other people post lyrics on here ? or not?
just wondered


Bren

[Rob The Badger]

That, ladies and gentlemen, is one helluva lyric. God I wish mine were that good.

Well done.

[White of High]

Eyeore!
Thanx!

Bren!
Why not?

[Rob The Badger]

Time to dig up some of my old song lyrics then . . .

[rockfenris2005]

I don't post lyrics here - cuz I'm afraid some major songwriter might steal them. And - WHITE OF HIGH - what important email did I have to reply to? THE SILENT MAN is going great!

[Rob The Badger]

If they do steal it, you can sue. Any songwriter knows that their work is automatically copyrighted for 70years after their death.

[evil nickname]

cuz I'm afraid some major songwriter might steal them.

Come on and please get real. Which major songwriter would *not* write his/her own songs?
I'd assume they know copyright-basics, so they won't be that stupid.

[rockfenris2005]

Whatever. In reply to White of High:
WE HAVE made a start on THE SILENT MAN (the music).
It starts out like PRAY LEWD (from Pandora's Box) -
A roaring fiendish grand piano, invoking an operatic OBJECTS
IN THE REAR VIEW MIRROR, then cranking it up to BAT OUT OF HELL.
The song is incomprehensible and strange, but very beautiful.
Despite the epic length (35 mins in full) it's... radiant!
I'll send a midi soon (I hope) but for now you'll have to cling in suspense.
Me and Daniel are working on 5 ballet sequences for NOSFERATU -
And I'm commencing production rehearsals next week.
Never mind, NATURE'S SIEGFRIED will be enormous -
A cross between BAT OUT OF HELL, DARK SIDE OF THE MOON,
WAGNER'S RING CYCLE and the cinematic TERMINATOR - with
Traditional Bible in the form of Medieval Theatre...

[White of High]

35 minutes length? Great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yes, I cling in suspense. I really wait this song and album. Oh yeah, could you say when will you give out the album? Then I would be there... :wink:

And lot of lucky for Nosferatu ballet! I know it will be great. And come with it to Hungary!

[evil nickname]

And I go like, whatever.

[The Flying Mouse]

Cool it please.

[rockfenris2005]

I can't say when the album will be ready - it all depends on the success of NOSFERATU and ITS cast album.

[White of High]

My computer was wrong in 2 or 3 weeks but I'm back! And I wasn't idle, inactive. Here is my next very long lyrics! I think it's more brurtal than The Silent Man. I think Ryan will like it! :)


Alone In The Dark Dance With The Fire

I'm walking on my own way
I'm unique who's alone in the city
I have fallen into deep solitude
I don't find way out (more's the pity)
I will be forever "en route"

A voice calls out of the depth
It gets me to do an action
I flare up from my ashes
My means run to every direction
Like the silver-lighting flashes

Alone in the dark
every night and every day
I'm sinking deeper and deeper
Alone in the dark
I'm dancing on the way of ray
In the gate of hell I'm the Keeper

When the Moon is trembling on the sky
My spirit hits the road
And I'm looking you everywhere
My heart is stone and oh so cold
I am overcome by scare

You are sitting on the beach
Look into each other's eyes
There is the smack of a kiss
You don't know these are white lies
You are burning in sacred bliss

Alone in the dark
every night and every day
I'm sinking deeper and deeper
Alone in the dark
I'm dancing on the way of ray
In the gate of hell I'm the Keeper

I see you and my heart is breaking
Why don't an angel take my hand?
Why don't I feel the grip of the love?
I'd like to sit on the sand
with my angelic dove

But the dreams are over
And the lonely consumes me
I say a prayer for the death
That my soul will be the endless free
And the pain's gonna be out of breath

Speech
I've had enough of suffering
I don't want to walk on the streets alone!
I'm drifting like a leaf between the land and sky
I'm lonely like a cvedar on top of the hill
I'm invisible like a dark mark on the jet-pitch-black
But I want to conquer my handicap
I know you are not at my side
And I know you don't wanna see me
So please give me a chance that my last dream comes through
Send me a thunder out of the blue!
Please, so please! Put and end to suffering!
Lying passions never capture me
Burning up the pain in the name of Death
And I swear on the sky the compassion won't effect on me
And I know I will never be...

Alone in the dark
every night and every day
I'm sinking deeper and deeper
Alone in the dark
I'm dancing on the way of ray
In the gate of hell I'm the Keeper

And now great storm is coming
The light of thunder obscures the clouds
There is an other-wordly bolt
The beam of light divides the clouts
And the lovers are burning and going by the board

At now I'm so happy
And the storm is abating
My heart is calm again
In this moment I'm waiting
That I will be my own man

I waited for a long time
Since I became estranged from the hope
On the ring of my heart there's the rime
Since I am at the end of my rope
I know my suffering is crime
Since I became estranged from the hope
The hell is my greatest shrine
Since I am at the end of my rope
I want to seize the shine
Since I became estranged from the hope
For better future I must pine
Since I am at the end of my rope
At first time here is the prime
Since I became estranged from the hope
I know I'll never run out of the time
Since I am at the start of my rope

I'm knocking on my door
And a hand opens the gate of fire
What the future has in store?
I step out of my pyre

I'm dancing with the fire
every night and every day
I'm flying higher and higher
I'm dancing with the fire
I'm dancing on the way of ray
That's the score of my desire

I stand above the lover's grave
And pick a dewy rose
My heart will nevermore rave
The dance draws to a close

My tears burning up the tomb
And the petals are falling into dust
I'll be there 'til the crack of doom
And the death sounds a blast

You will dance with the fire
every night and every day
You will fly higher and higher
You will dance with the fire
You will dance on the way of ray
That'll the score of my desire

You will dance with the fire
every night and every day
You will fly higher and higher
You will dance with the fire
You will dance on the way of ray
That'll the score of my desire

I feel so lonely myself
I feel so cold
I don't wanna dance with the fire
But I'd like to make a bolt
I see my fate
I see my raging pyre
I see my last moments
Alone in the dark dance with the fire

I see my last moments
Alone in the dark dance with the fire
I see my last moments
Alone in the dark dance with the fire
I see my last moments
Alone in the dark dance with the fire...

[Sapphire Lady]

Very impressive :D

[Sapphire Lady]

Very impressive :D

[Rob The Badger]

It's very long. . . .good, but long. . .

[Crystal Eyes]

Woah! White I hadn't read these before. They're great. Amazing imagery.

[White of High]

How would had you read these before? These are by me. But you will read them later... I promise!

[Crystal Eyes]

Sorry. I meant I hadn't found this topic before that's all.

[White of High]

Have A Good Cry

When the Sun is reviving on the skyline
I know nothing has got lost
When the power of light pervades my body
Fever will be mine at any cost
Until I have a good cry

When the tears are coming out of your eyes
I fall in love with you
When the sparkle consumes the sorrow
I wonder what's a wonderful blue
Until I have a good cry

Those eyes never find me
Until I have a good cry
Without you I'll never be free
Until I have a good cry
My fancy's flying away
Until I have a good cry
But I live in shadow everyday
Until I have a good cry
I'm going away next to my future
Until I have a good cry
The darkest lonely will be my teacher
Until I have a good cry
I prefer to close my eyes
Until I have a good cry
The pack of the depht's gonna prize
Until I have a good cry

Will my Sun gleams on the sky?
Will I fight against the die?
Can I think with the golden bliss
until I have a good cry?
Will the angel always fly?
Will my dream stays celestial high?
Can I give you a dewy kiss
until I have a good cry?

When the Moon is roaming in the dark
I know everything's got lost
When the whole obscurity seize the night
Cold will be mine at any cost
And I have a good cry

When my tears are falling into the dust
You leave me alone
When the sorrow consumes the sparkle
In my heart there's a thorn
And I have a good cry

Those eyes never find me
And I have a good cry
Without you I'll never be free
And I have a good cry
My fancy's flying away
And I have a good cry
But I live in shadow everyday
And I have a good cry
I'm going away next to my future
And I have a good cry
The darkest lonely will be my teacher
And I have a good cry
I prefer to close my eyes
And I have a good cry
The pack of the depht's gonna prize
And I have a good cry

Will my Moon gleams on the sky?
Will I come to terms with die?
Can I think with the hopeless bliss
until I have a good cry?
Will the angel always fly?
Will my dream stays in not too high?
Can I give up the dewy kiss
until I have a good cry?

[Bren]

When my tears are falling into the dust
You leave me alone
When the sorrow consumes the sparkle
In my heart there's a thorn
And I have a good cry

Beautiful, White Of High....particularly like the lines quoted above.

Bren

[RSG]

8O 8O 8O White Of High, I just read "World Without Scream".
Honestly, how can you do that? You are amazing, I promise you I will read the rest, but I have to go to school tomorow. But White, I have to say, your work is amazing. Its really well done. I love how you make these so long. Never edit the good stuff. The best stuff (like yours) when your pen leaves that paper. You copyright your work and you publish it. That stuff may have been long, but geez white, You Have Talent. I've always admired people like you. (and Steinman) but I really admire you. <personally, i don't have anyone to look up to really<personal reasons) . You are awesome. That's all I can say. Unless there is a word more powerful than that. Incredible!! Excellent White, really, I mean it. :)

[White of High]

Thanks these words RSG! Very thank you! But I think your words are heavy and they should not be. I think everybody can write so if she/he let her/his soul to fly...

[mariella]

No, White, I for one would like to be able, to put my feelings into words, the way you are...Have the greatest respect for you!
...How have you been?

xxx

Mariella

Love your work!

[Rob The Badger]

And I thought I had talent 8O . . .

[White of High]

Eyeore!
You write in other style. Your poems (and Bren) are shorts without rhyme. But it doesn't matter, it means nothing. Maybe yes, you won't set to music but it's not problem. I hope I will have luck with somebody, for example Ryan (rockfenris) or Thanatos (from Carpe-Jugulum). They are very good! Eyeore! Try with longer... if you want! I promise your English will be better than me!

[Rob The Badger]

Thanks WoH. I'll give it a shot sometime ^_^ :D

[White of High]

Mariella!
How? Very easy! Very very easy! I let my soul's flying and the words are on the paper. I have to think with my life, with her, with God, with solitude... And I have to think alone in my bed in the dark in the depth in mood of great music.

Some tips: Bonnie Portmore by Loreena MyKennitt, Fly by Celine Dion, October by U2, For Crying Out Loud by Meat Loaf, (It's Hard) Letting You Go by Bon Jovi, So Long Ago So Clear by Jon & Vangelis, West Acroos The Ocean Sea & Nina, Pinta, Sanat Maria by Vangelis.

Well, here are some examples. Try it!

[White of High]

And oh yes!
I've forgotten! A musical is coming... out of my vein!

[Bren]

Mariella!
How? Very easy! Very very easy! I let my soul's flying and the words are on the paper. I have to think with my life, with her, with God, with solitude... And I have to think alone in my bed in the dark in the depth in mood of great music.



A beautiful description White Of High.
I agree music is very inspirational......i often write poetry when alone , quiet and listening to a beautiful piece of music.
Music is often the inspiration for my paintings too.

Keep writing White Of High, you have a true gift

Bren

[RSG]

I would love to write feelings and really interesting powerful stuff on paper. But I just don't know how. Believe me White, I meant every word. I'm a very honest person, and I don't regret saying one word. I know there probably isn't a real lesson in writing. You're just born with it right ??

[Rob The Badger]

I disagree. I think if you read a lot of poetry, read books a lot, and just open up you'll get it one day. Practice really does make perfect, but like any other form of art, you need to imitate others to start and eventually you'll develop a style that's unique to you. Simple really.

[White of High]

The lines are coming...
A musical is coming...

[Rob The Badger]

Good stff WoH! :D