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R.
06 May 2002, 23:47
Ok, lurkers - here goes:

I'm wondering, if we get this thing going: an ongoing story.
I'm going to start off with just 1 or sentence and you may add whatever you like ...

Got it?
It's your turn now!
8)
R.

Start:
Once upon a time in a country not far away in ...

Timewarp.nl
07 May 2002, 09:25
where angels had guitars before they had wings

Tim
07 May 2002, 13:30
And there is no day or night,
No hate and no fight

Chris
07 May 2002, 13:40
A man had his buddies, a beer and a dream to......

Michel
07 May 2002, 22:17
become Prime Minister of the Netherlands

tukayaway
08 May 2002, 22:28
Hey Ricky, now mine is empty, how about one for you?

R.
08 May 2002, 23:15
... "Sure, mate! http://www.mlukfc.com/chat/images/burp.gif" one of those buddies answered and went off to order another round.

Meanwhile ...

Chris
09 May 2002, 00:00
But on the way to the bar he got distracted by....

Michael
09 May 2002, 00:35
A DEAD RINGER FOR LOVE

Chris
09 May 2002, 18:20
Who said..... :??:

R.
10 May 2002, 00:24
....

"Excuse me, but is this an empty bottle in your trousers or are you just happy to see me?" .
At first he didn't know what to say, but then ...

Anonymous
10 May 2002, 00:26
YOU TOOK THE WORDS RIGHT OUT OF MY MOUTH

Steve
10 May 2002, 01:15
In his embarrassment, he dropped his wallet, keys and and PDA - despite grovelling around frantically, he couldn't find the PDA...

dottie
26 May 2003, 18:55
...then heard a bleep bleep..

Tim
26 May 2003, 19:28
....he picked up his phone, and there was a friend with a very bad attitude....

original sin
26 May 2003, 21:04
So he told him to lose the attitude and hung up, by which time the beer's had taken effect so he made his way across the crowed bar to get to the mens room, as he pushed the door open.............

Ben
26 May 2003, 21:05
who just wanted a piece of the action

dottie
26 May 2003, 22:55
..it was a woman dressed to kill in the mens room Hi honey she snarled...

badger
27 May 2003, 03:41
"what are you doing in here, get out quick!" (he said to his daughter)

Ben
27 May 2003, 09:39
but i need to ask you a very very important question.......'Does My Bum Look Big In This??'

dottie
27 May 2003, 10:34
...touch of the J-Lo there honey..

dottie
27 May 2003, 10:52
..have to look after that otherwise it'll end up on the floor, looking like a wedding train..

Ben
27 May 2003, 12:10
...they said that you had a bad attitude, but i didnt believe them until now...

dottie
27 May 2003, 17:43
..you shouldn't listen to others little boy, aren't u man enough to make your're own mind up..

original sin
27 May 2003, 20:07
Then he could take no more he grabed his jacket and went out to find his motorbike, It was a hot summers night and...........

Testify
27 May 2003, 20:14
..all revved up with no place to go...

dottie
27 May 2003, 20:37
..he felt a burning in his heart that wouldn't go away...

Tim
27 May 2003, 20:55
... and a soar throat, cause he couldn't say nothing at all...

Ben
27 May 2003, 21:02
are you pleased to see me or is that a gun in your pocket she whispered

dottie
27 May 2003, 21:03
Well honey its what ever you want it to be

dottie
27 May 2003, 22:22
then suddenly......

original sin
27 May 2003, 22:27
......a roar was heard in the alley and it sounded like........

dottie
27 May 2003, 22:39
...a silver black phantom bike..

The Flying Mouse
27 May 2003, 22:42
squeek :mrgreen:

dottie
27 May 2003, 22:49
... the biker roared out of the alley and onto the sidewalk, missing an old down and out squatting at the side of the kerb..

The Flying Mouse
27 May 2003, 22:52
Ain't life just one big lemon said the down and out....

original sin
27 May 2003, 22:53
...the old man stood up casting aside the boxes and the newspapers and......

dottie
27 May 2003, 22:54
Sure is replied the biker - you could have been a squashed one (humour)

Ben
27 May 2003, 23:21
then you defiently would not have got your money back would you,

original sin
27 May 2003, 23:28
...the biker made to go , but the down and out demanded recompense and shouted "come back! come back! I'll kill you if you don't come back!"......

Testify
27 May 2003, 23:31
...i got a taste of paradise...

Ben
27 May 2003, 23:34
said the biker as he hit the highway on his silver black phantom bike, he looked back and the down and out and just laughed to him help, and though, what a wasted youth he must have had.

Testify
27 May 2003, 23:36
...someone gotta draw first blood...

original sin
27 May 2003, 23:39
......he went tearing down the highway, going faster and faster heading towards the coast......

Testify
27 May 2003, 23:40
...looking for ruby in a mountain of rocks.....

Ben
28 May 2003, 01:10
nobodys gotta stop me now im gonna make my escape he said

Jen
28 May 2003, 01:14
...but he didn't see the sudden curve until it was way too late...

original sin
28 May 2003, 01:18
......and the bike and the rider were heading towards the cliff edge, out of control then suddenly dark storm clouds gathered overhead and......

Jen
28 May 2003, 01:28
...like an angel rising out of a tomb, a giant bat flew up ond over the edge knocking the rider...

martha_mae
28 May 2003, 01:29
....when like a grocery boy stacking boxes full of hungry dreams...

original sin
28 May 2003, 01:35
......the bat grabbed the rider by the collar of his jacket and flew higher and higher up through the storm clouds, over the sea until.....

dottie
28 May 2003, 01:38
..he reached the gates of heaven...

Jen
28 May 2003, 01:46
...where it droped the rider in a crumpled heap at the foot of the gates...

dottie
28 May 2003, 01:49
..a broken and dirty tired old man not a boy anymore...

Jen
28 May 2003, 01:58
...but before he could do anything else...

martha_mae
28 May 2003, 02:45
...A VOICE BOOMED OUT....

Jen
28 May 2003, 02:50
...Stop right there!...

martha_mae
28 May 2003, 02:52
...what do you think your doing boy!...

Jen
28 May 2003, 02:57
...the rider spun around, trying to see where the voice was coming from...

martha_mae
28 May 2003, 03:00
..the voice continued "You Know I Love You" but...

Jen
28 May 2003, 03:07
...just then the rider spotted a shadowy figure lurking off to the side of the gates...

martha_mae
28 May 2003, 03:24
...whos eyes blazed a fiery red & seemed to pierce right into his soul...

martha_mae
28 May 2003, 03:33
...The rider said "Why am i here?"....

Asha
28 May 2003, 05:42
"You have been chosen", the voice boomed, "Chosen to be......

dottie
28 May 2003, 11:29
..the leader of the pack...

martha_mae
28 May 2003, 13:58
..."it ain't right, it ain't fair!" replied the rider...

The Flying Mouse
28 May 2003, 15:50
The voice boomed again
Do notest give any of thy lip,or thy will smite thee.....

Testify
28 May 2003, 18:01
...for crying out loud...

Tim
28 May 2003, 18:07
... and all revved up with no place to go...

dottie
28 May 2003, 18:32
Oh that I were a glove upon that hand that I might touch that face...

Tim
28 May 2003, 22:01
... that face, that looks like a pearl, shinning in the light of the sun...

Ben
28 May 2003, 23:15
what have i done, why choose me?

Testify
28 May 2003, 23:24
.. i dont know what it is but....

martha_mae
29 May 2003, 01:18
...but its something you can reach out & feel....

twilight
29 May 2003, 01:28
...so standing before the gates of heaven the rider reaches out to feel the......

dottie
29 May 2003, 01:46
..pearly gates....

martha_mae
29 May 2003, 01:58
...burning brightly in the dark...

Ben
29 May 2003, 02:15
he hears a noise and slowly turns around to see what it was......

martha_mae
29 May 2003, 02:28
...not again he thinks "what now!"...

dottie
29 May 2003, 12:10
....as Satan creeps up behind him, "aren't u in the wrong place"asked the biker

Ben
29 May 2003, 13:09
..im never in the wrong place, you hear me NEVER!

dottie
29 May 2003, 14:34
..I belong in Heaven and Hell...

Ben
29 May 2003, 15:04
AND ALL PLACES IN BETWEEN

dottie
29 May 2003, 15:16
Where's that then he asked...

Ben
29 May 2003, 18:50
oh, you know, a little place here and a little place there...

dottie
29 May 2003, 20:27
.....a little place over and a little place under...

Jen
29 May 2003, 21:55
...and around, behind and infront...

dottie
29 May 2003, 22:36
..upstairs and downstairs....

Ben
30 May 2003, 00:39
and side to side

original sin
30 May 2003, 00:42
..but then you gotta wiggle it, just a little bit..... :?

Ben
30 May 2003, 00:43
just to get it in....

Testify
30 May 2003, 00:43
..do it...

martha_mae
30 May 2003, 01:08
....DO WOT?!....

dottie
30 May 2003, 01:19
...thats for me to do and you to find out about...

martha_mae
30 May 2003, 01:25
...Well why say in the 1st place, if you aint going to tell me!?....

dottie
30 May 2003, 01:32
...cous I'm the devil and its my job to confuse you.....

martha_mae
30 May 2003, 01:36
...Heck i was already confused before you joined in!...

dottie
30 May 2003, 01:40
...Now you can unravel this mystery as to why the biker was standing at the gates of heaven....

martha_mae
30 May 2003, 01:52
...confused 'cause the devil was talking to him over his right shoulder....

dottie
30 May 2003, 11:22
...instead of his left.. so he thought it was the Ancient Mariner...

dottie
30 May 2003, 11:41
....doth behind him tread....

Ben
30 May 2003, 12:48
but he couldnt be sure as he couldnt see his face clearly

dottie
30 May 2003, 18:18
..the mist and darkness swirled around him, enveloping all and sundry...

dottie
30 May 2003, 18:36
...darkness descended and the howling started, the biker looked but couldn't quite see the face in front of him, good job to it looked like a.....

dottie
30 May 2003, 20:17
....a creature from the blue lagoon....

Jen
30 May 2003, 22:14
...with a terrifying looking...

R.
30 May 2003, 22:17
Ok. Somebody should post the whole story (so far).
Volunteers? :))

martha_mae
30 May 2003, 23:17
A rider on a black phantom bike is heading for the edge of a cliff when a giant bat flies down & takes him to the gates of heaven, where he meets the devil who tells him "your the leader of the pack", the devil looks like the creature from the blue lagoon with a terrifying look....

P.S I think thats it? :?

R.
30 May 2003, 23:26
Mmmh ... 6 pages with 20 post per page and the story is that short?
Did you start at page 1? 8)

martha_mae
30 May 2003, 23:33
Sorry R i just gave a brief synopsis :lol: